Interesting photo. I like how you made it seem like an older photo. I don't think there is enough focus on the model in this image. Can we brighten her a little bit? Even if we did in this image, though, it seems as though there is too much shadow on her face. Always try and make the lighting on the face as opposed to coming from behind. I do like the effect that the lighting has on her dress, though.

The sparkles in the water is nice, although why not try and make them brighter around her and darker as you go further out of the focal. It seems that you vignetted the image, but the sparkles don't seem to be any less bright and that feels very off.

Nice little lens flare. Keep up the good work.